Back in 1978, George Lucas and Steven Spielberg got together with Larry Kasdan to hash out the story for Raiders of the Lost Ark. The meeting was recorded and transcribed. (I guess that’s what you do when you’ve got a few bucks and you’re afraid of forgetting brilliant ideas.)

Fast forward to 2009, when a scan of this 126 page (!) transcript started circulating online. It’s a remarkable read. You can see the characters and plot being built from the ground up. Also, tacked on at the end is an additional conversation between Debbie Fine, Larry Kasdan, and Phil Kaufman.

Download the original document here.

Download the easier-to-read transcript here.

Feeling adventurous? Read it with Stanza on your iPhone! I’ve translated the file into ebook format here:
http://maddogmovies.com/almost/ebooks/raidersstoryconf1978.sgf

Mystery Man on Film has a good analysis of the document here.

Thanks to Moedred’s Journal for providing the transcript in text format.

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“Fall of the Republic mini-FAQ” version 1.2, March 1995.
by David Hines, dzhines@midway.uchicago.edu

Questions answered in this FAQ:
1. “Hey, everybody! I’ve got this thing called “Fall of the Republic -”
2. “Why are you guys screaming like that?”
3. “What’s a FAQ, and why does FotR need one?”
4. “Okay, so what’s the deal with FotR?”
5. “What do you mean, it’s not real?”
6. “Yeah, what’s this about the third episode? Wasn’t that Return of the Jedi?”
7. “Okay. FotR is a fake, but where did it come from?”8. “Who is this John L. Flynn guy?”9. “Where is FotR available on the Internet?”
10. “Okay, I’ve got FotR. How do I convert it into something I can read?”
11. “I don’t have ftp access. What do I do?”

1. “Hey, everybody! I’ve got this thing called “Fall of the Republic -”

AAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

2. “Why are you guys screaming like that?”

Well, you see, some topics get rehashed quite a bit on thisnewsgroup. That’s understandable, since more people come on tousenet every day. Even if, as is recommended, you lurk in a newnewsgroup [lurk: read without posting] for a whole week beforeyou make your first post, you’ll miss some of the discussion that’s gone before.

Some topics get endlessly rehashed. Topics like bloopers andMark Hamill’s car accident have been brought up over and over, untilmost people are heartily sick of them.

“Fall of the Republic” [hereafter FotR] is one of those topics. People keep bringing it up when they join the newsgroup. Recently, there has been a huge surge of folks pointing out the existence of FotR. Asa result, this mini-FAQ was composed.

3. “What’s a FAQ, and why does FotR need one?”

FAQ stands for Frequently Asked Questions. It gives thequestions and their answers.

FotR needs a FAQ because so many people have questions about it.

4. “Okay, so what’s the deal with FotR?”

It’s not real.

5. “What do you mean, it’s not real?”

Well, it is real, if by “real” you mean that it really exists,and has been written by somebody. However, FotR is not “real” in the sense that it is nota real story treatment for the third episode of the Star Wars saga.

6. “Yeah, what’s this about the third episode? Wasn’t that Return of the Jedi?”

No, that was the sixth episode. RotJ was, however, thethird film to be released. Basically, the Trilogy we know iscomposed of episodes four through six.

Lucas is now working on the scripts for episodes onethrough three. The films are due out in 1998; for more information,see the New Movies FAQ, kept by Aditya Sood.

7. “Okay. FotR is a fake, but where did it come from?”

Good question. “John L. Flynn” is listed as the author, butno one really knows who wrote it, except perhaps the author himself.(More about John L. Flynn follows in question 8.)

Before it was made available on the Internet, most peoplepicked it up at conventions. Dealers sold it at their tables; asfar as we know, the story treatment (it’s too brief to be a script)made its debut around 1983 or so. It may have been around earlier. The earliest possible date for it is 1979, which is when”Star Wars” was rereleased with the subtitle “Episode IV: A New Hope.”Before then, “Star Wars” was just “Star Wars;” no one could haveknown about Episode III being a prequel. Most reports, however (I’m using hearsay, admittedly, from reports of people on thegroup who remember FotR from *way* back) place it at about 1983. (FotR itself has a 1983 date on it, but there’s no way toknow whether or not that date is correct.)

8. “Who is this John L. Flynn guy anyway?”

Beats the heck out of me. The only thing I’ve heard from him other than FotR is a magazine article on the prequel Trilogy in March’s Cinescape. Lots of stuff in the article is drawn from FotR;perhaps Flynn really did write the article. I suppose it’s possible that someone at Cinescape used Flynn’s name as an obscure joke. However,considering the amount of confusion perpetrated in Flynn’s name overthe years, I would find the joke in exceedingly poor taste.

9. “Where is FotR available on the Internet?”

It’s at wpi.wpi.edu, in the directory starwars/stories.Log in with “anonymous” as your username and your email address as your password.

10. “Okay, I’ve got FotR. How do I convert it into something I can read?”

To quote the wpi server itself:250- All ascii text files are compressed (.Z suffix) to save on room. On250- Unix systems just type – uncompress file.Z – to uncompress it.250- MAC user can use the program maccompress-32.hqx – It can be found on250- the FTP site: sumex-aim.stanford.edu in the directory /info-mac/util/250- VMS users can use the program lzdcmp.exe to uncompress the .Z files.250- It can be found on the FTP site: wuarchive.wustl.edu in the250- directory /packages/compression/vax-vms250- PC user can use one of many porgrams on: ftp.uu.net in the 250- directory /systems/ibmpc/simtel/compress250- Remember to download ALL files with the .Z, .gif, .jpg suffix250- in BINARY mode. To do this simply type – bin – at the ftp> prompt.250- If not the files may not work after the transfer.

11. “I don’t have ftp access. What do I do?”

Trust me: if you haven’t read it, you’re not missing much.But if you *really* want to read it, email me and I’ll send you theuncompressed text file.David Hinesdzhines@midway.uchicago.edu

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• Indiana Jones and the Sons of Darkness by R. Marshall Smith
  Originally credited to Jeffrey Boam, this version of the script has been neutered by someone – all references to Indiana Jones have been replaced with “Alabama Smith.” More about the history at indyfan.com and in the forums of theraider.net.
• Indiana Jones and the Sword of Arthur by Steven Frye and Michael Prentice
  Another almost-written-by-Boam hoax. Read the sordid history at indyfan.com
• Indiana Jones and the Tomb of Ice by Anonymous
  This one has some formatting problems – a fan script giveaway. But it’s hard to track down elsewhere, so I’m posting it here.
• Indiana Jones and the Raiders of the Fallen Empire by Garrett Black
• Indiana Jones and the Saucer Men from Mars by Jeb Stuart
  Read a script review at IGN here.

Although two writers, Terry Hayes and Rafael Yglesias, were credited on the draft, but both denied writing it. The author was later discovered to be Brandon Gaines.

Read some of the news coverage from IGN.

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Read about this project’s history at CHUD.com

• Sandman by Ted Elliott and Terry Rossio
• Sandman by Ted Elliott, Terry Rossio, and Roger Avary (no longer online)

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Keep your eyes on bubbanosferatu.com for future updates.

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• I Am Legend by Mark Protosevich
• I Am Legend by John Logan

Read a review of the script from UGO Screenwriter’s Voice.

Update 9/8/09: Diamond Dead is now a rock music show. See deadrockproductions.com for performance info.

Years later, Cameron’s mysterious Project 880 turned out to be Avatar after all. (This wasn’t surprising, since Lightstorm Entertainment asked us internet folks to stop hosting the Avatar materials online.)

Confused? See the Joblo story here.

Ain’t it Cool has a synopsis of the scriptment here.

There’s a neat run-down of creatures, locations, and crafts at AvatarMovieZone.com

• “The Star Wars” Story Synopsis
• The Star Wars (Rough draft)
• The Star Wars (1st draft)
• Adventures of the Starkiller: (episode one) “The Star Wars” (2nd draft)
• The Star Wars: From The Adventures of Luke Starkiller (3rd draft)
• Star Wars: A New Hope (Revised 4th draft)

THE ORIGINS OF STAR WARS: EVOLUTION OF A SPACE SAGA
By John L. Flynn
THIS ARTICLE WAS ORIGINALLY PUBLISHED IN NOT OF THIS EARTH, SUMMER 1994 SPECIAL.
Copyright 1994 by John L. Flynn

The Star Wars Trilogy, comprising Episodes four through six “A New Hope,” “The Empire Strikes Back” and “Return of the Jedi” (respectively), did not begin as one fully-developed, high-concept pitch but rather evolved over a five-year period through a variety of scripts and story treatments. In fact, the origins, original storylines and development of the characters are just as fascinating as anything that has appeared in George Lucas’s final vision, and provide the impetus for this article. But like all great sagas, one must go back to the beginning, back to that first spark of the imagination.

“There’s a whole generation growing up without any kind of fairy tales,” Lucas first stated in 1972, thinking in very nebulous terms about a timeless fable that would help teach children about the differences between right and wrong, good and evil. “And kids need fairy tales–it’s an important thing for society to have.”

After failing miserably to satisfy the corporate executives at Warner Brothers with his first feature film, THX 1138 (1970), George Lucas began submitting ideas for two other motion pictures to several of the other studios. One of his ideas, which was drawn from his youthful experiences growing up in Modesto, California, eventually became the hit movie American Graffiti (1973). The other was a remake of Alex Raymond’s “Flash Gordon.” Lucas had long since dreamed of making a space adventure that would evoke the Flash Gordon and Buck Rogers serials of the thirties, and tried unsuccessfully to purchase the movie rights to several Raymond properties. (Federico Fellini had already optioned them, and the film Flash Gordon would eventually be made by Italian producer Dino De Laurentiis in 1980.) Still obsessed with making a big budget space-fantasy, George obtained tentative approval from David Picker at United Artists for a completely original story he had yet to write.

While he was completing his final touches on American Graffiti in February 1973, Lucas started sketching rough ideas for his film. He wrote every morning, and spent his afternoons and evenings researching fairy tales, mythology and the writings of Joseph Campbell (in particular, The Hero With a Thousand Faces) and Carlos Castaneda (notably Tales of Power). He also consumed every work of science fiction, from the classics of the genre by Edgar Rice Burroughs and Alex Raymond to the more contemporary tales of Isaac Asimov, Frank Herbert, E.E. “Doc” Smith, and Arthur C. Clarke. But George knew that he was much more of a conceptualist than a writer, and admitted to having great difficulty getting his ideas down on paper. He was still struggling with those ideas when he first met Ralph McQuarrie, an illustrator for Boeing Aircraft who had also worked for NASA, and asked him for suggestions how to visualize his concepts for the screen.

By May 1973, George Lucas had completed a ponderous thirteen-page story treatment. Handwritten on notebook paper, it told “the story of Mace Windu, a revered Jedi-bendu of Ophuchi who was related to Usby C.J. Thape, a padawaan leader to the famed Jedi.” His agent Jeff Berg and attorney Tom Pollack didn’t understand a single word but, nonetheless, agreed to help him submit the idea to United Artists, which still held first option on his “big sci-fi/space adventure/Flash Gordon thing.” David Picker reviewed Lucas’s treatment for The Star Wars, as it was then called, and passed on the project fearing how much it would cost to make. Universal Pictures, which also held an option on George’s next picture as part of the Graffiti deal, was equally cautious, and eventually declined to develop the project.

Somewhat discouraged, Lucas finally consented to meet with Alan Ladd, Jr., then studio executive at 20th Century-Fox. (Prior to that meeting, his agent had managed to smuggle prints of THX 1138 and American Graffiti to the studio head; Ladd was impressed with what he saw. He had a special eye for talent, and desperately wanted to work with the young director.) Once George had finished pitching his complicated story to Ladd, the executive agreed in principle to a deal, even though he really didn’t understand the concept. (Lucas later relied on production sketches from Ralph McQuarrie to further cement Fox’s offer to back a big-budget space-fantasy.) Less than two weeks after Universal had turned Star Wars down, the 20th Century-Fox Film Corporation agreed to pay George Lucas $50,000 to write and $100,000 to direct a film that would eventually gross $250 million. Of course, Lucas was still without a workable script.

When his first $10,000 check from 20th Century-Fox arrived in September 1973, George was hard at work on a script. “I was fascinated by the futuristic society, the idea of rocket ships and lasers up against somebody with a stick,” he later commented, but he still had problems fleshing out the characters. Lucas looked everywhere for ideas for Star Wars and borrowed very liberally from his sources. The major influence on his writing was Alex Raymond’s Flash Gordon serials. Light bridges, cloud cities, space swords, blasters, video screens, medieval costumes and aerial battles were all lifted from the crude serials of the thirties. From Asimov’s Foundation trilogy, he incorporated ideas dealing with political intrigue on a galactic level; from Frank Herbert’s Dune, notions of rare spices (ultimately dropped), galactic traders and spacing guilds and a desert planet; from Edgar Rice Burroughs’s John Carter of Mars, banthas and huge flying birds (also discarded); from E.E. “Doc” Smith’s Lensman saga came his notions about the Jedi knights and the Force. He also borrowed ideas from his own THX 1138, including the robot policeman (who became stormtroopers) and the underground dwellers (Jawas). Star Wars would be derivative of every great science fiction theme and yet, at the same time, would remain completely original.

For two and a half years, he struggled with his worst fears, and went through dozens of ideas. (Many of those scripts and story ideas are summarized below.) He started with one storyline, but soon realized that it was too long for a single picture. He cut it in half, and then divided each half into three episodes. The Star Wars Trilogy, as it exists today, is actually the second part of that larger story. On March 25, 1976, George Lucas began production of the first film in the bitter cold of the Sahara Desert, and slightly more than seven years later watched his collection of ideas become the most popular film series in cinematic history.

THE ORIGINAL STORY TREATMENT

May 1973–The original story synopsis for The Star Wars told “the story of Mace Windu, a revered Jedi-bendu of Ophuchi who was related to Usby C.J. Thape, a padawaan leader to the famed Jedi.” Far above the blue-green planet of Aguilae, a silent battle takes place. Six sleek, fighter-type spacecraft rocket toward an orbiting speck, which is a gargantuan space fortress, and fire their laser bolts. The small ships are no match for the fortress, and are easily dispatched. The explosions echo across the vastness of space, and a roll-up explains that “it is the twenty-third century, a period of civil war . . .”

Leia, a rebel princess accompanied by her family and retainers, flees across that sector of space, pursued by Imperial forces of an evil sovereign. She is protected by General Luke Skywalker, an aging man who is the last of the Jedi knights. She carries 200 pounds of a rare cargo of spice and two terrified, bickering Imperial bureaucrats aboard her ship. Forced to land on Aguilae, she and the others hide from an Imperial patrol in the ruins of a religious temple. There, they discover a rebel band of ten boys (aged fifteen to eighteen) who are planning to attack an Imperial outpost. Skywalker reluctantly accepts their help, and the group of allies heads toward a shabby cantina on the outskirts of the space port. (Leia hopes to make contact with the rebel underground, and hire a ship to take her to Ophuchi.)

Betrayed by an Imperial spy, they narrowly escape the port in a stolen space freighter, only to be chased across the galaxy by Imperial starships. Their ship is hit several times by laserblasts, and they are forced to hide in an asteroid belt to make repairs.

When they resume their trek across space, the ship is again fired upon by Imperial troops, and crippled beyond repair. Skywalker manuevers the doomed ship toward the mysterious jungle planet of Yavin, and orders everyone to jettison safely away with rocket packs. Their group is separated, attacked by giant furry aliens, and eventually reunited by a grizzled old farmer (who is married to one of the alien creatures). Leia, however, is not as fortunate as the others, and finds herself captured, then sold to Imperial troops, by the furry aliens. (She is to be taken to Alderaan, capitol of the Empire, and exchanged for a huge bounty posted by the Sovereign.)

Determined to free her from the clutches of the evil galactic emperor, General Skywalker trains the boys to fly one-man “devil fighters.” Then, with their ships disguised as Imperial rangers, the small armada flies right through the defenses of Alderaan. They penetrate the prison complex, and free the princess from her captors. Several of the boys are killed in duels with laser guns and swords, while the others fight their way through the Imperial fleet in a laser-blasting dogfight in space. Once back on Ophuchi, the boys and General Skywalker are greeted with a great ceremony to welcome the conquering heroes. They are rewarded with medals and offered commissions in the guard by the princess, who reveals her true “goddesslike” self. The two bureaucrats get drunk and stumble off into the darkness, “realizing that they have been adventuring with demigods.”

Though somewhat crude and unpolished, the thirteen-page story treatment sketches out most of the action which will follow in the series. The group’s adventures on Aguilae (in the desert and cantina), Leia’s rescue from the prison complex, the dogfight in space and the rewards’ ceremony all survive to the final draft of Star Wars. The chase across space, and in the asteroid belt, and the intrigue on the city-planet of Alderaan form the basis of The Empire Strikes Back, and the jungle battle finds life in Return of the Jedi. The characters also remain surprisingly faithful to their first inception, even though certain changes do occur. Leia continues as princess, while the character of Luke Skywalker is made a teenager (replacing the rebel band of boys). The aging General becomes Ben Kenobi, the desert rat and aging Jedi knight. The two bumbling bureaucrats are transformed into two bumbling robots; the furry aliens evolve into both Chewbacca, the Wookiee prince, and the Ewoks, and the Sovereign becomes Emperor. The only central character that is missing from this early screen treatment is Darth Vader, but he would turn up later as two villains.

THE SUBSEQUENT REVISIONS

May 1974–After working for more than a year, George completed the first draft screenplay to The Star Wars. The story introduced the Jedi Bendu, who were the chief architects of the invincible Imperial Space Force and personal bodyguards of the Emperor, and pitted them against the evil Knights of the Sith, a sinister warrior sect. The hero Annikin Starkiller, eighteen, his younger brother Deak, and their father Kane – the last of the Jedi Bendu – have been hiding out on the desert planet of Utapau for many years. When Deak is killed by a seven-foot tall black knight, who comes looking for them, Kane decides that it’s time to end their exile.

Meanwhile, on the cloud city of Alderaan, the Emperor Cos Dashit launches a final assault on the last of the independent systems with secret orders to destroy the last of the Jedi on Aquilae. Luke Skywalker, an aging general in his sixties and former Jedi master, tries to mount an adequate defense against the assault; but the leaders of Aguilae decide to settle for peace when an armored battle station, the size of a moon, approaches. (The small “devil fighters” are no match against the fortress.) Skywalker suspects a trap, and urges the Imperial family (with their fourteen year-old daughter Leia) to hide. When Kane and his son Annikin arrive, Luke enlists the aide of the young Starkiller (who wants to learn the ways of the Jedi from the old master) to escort the princess and her family to safety. (The King is eventually killed, and the Queen demands that Leia and her two brothers, Biggs and Windy, be taken to Ophuchi.)

During the one-sided battle, two construction robots (Artwoo Detwo and See-ThreePio) on the battlestation complain about the laserblasts (striking nearby their location) and are ejected to safety in a space pod. They crashland in the Jundland wastes of Aquilae, and stumble across the royal party. The robots join forces with Annikin, Luke and Leia, and the others and travel to the space port at Anchorhead.

The invasion force, led by General Darth Vader and Prince Valorum (a black knight of the Sith), enter the capitol city of Aquilae, and discover that all have fled to safety. Valorum is angered, and demands that Vader produce both the royal family and the last Jedi-Bendu. Determined to find them before they can escape the planet, Imperial troops are dispatched to all the major space ports, including the one at Anchorhead. At the same time, Luke has managed to contact Han Solo, a huge green-skinned smuggler who might have a space ship fast enough to get through the Imperial bockade.

Han produces the ship, a “Baltarian” freighter, but unfortunately it lacks an intregal part for one of the freezing chambers. (Imperial troops cannot identify lifeforms frozen in suspended animation, and that’s the only way they’ll get through a blockade.) Kane, who has already admitted that he is slowly dying, sacrifices himself by pulling the power unit from his cybernetic armor; Annikin is torn with grief, but comforted by both Leia and Skywalker.

Once outfitted with the new part, their space ship easily manages to slip through the Imperial starfleet, but is later spotted by a routine patrol. Han decides to flee the enemy craft by flying into an asteroid belt; however, the fragile freighter sustains massive asteroid damage, and they are forced to eject their lifepods over the forbidden jungle world of Yavin. On Yavin, the princess is captured by trappers and exchanged for bounty from Imperial troops. Annikin is separated from the others, and frees Chewbacca and other Wookees from the same trappers. They reward his courage with their allegiance against the Empire. Luke, Han, C-3PO and the boys meet anthropologists Owen and Beru Lars, who lead them to the Wookee camp. Finally reunited, the group convinces the Wookees to attack the Imperial outpost to free Leia, but discover much too late that she has been returned to Aquilae.

General Skywalker is determined to free her from the clutches of the evil galactic emperor, and trains the Wookees to fly one-man assault fighters. Meanwhile, Annikin has slipped aboard the battlestation, disguised as an Imperial starraider, to locate and free Leia from her detention cell. But before he can reach her cell, he is brought down by stormtroopers. Vader takes the young captive to the control room, and begins torturing him in front of a disgruntled Valorum. Then, as the Wookees attack the space fortress and Han coordinates an uprising on the planet (among members of the spacing guild), Valorum has a change of heart. He frees both the princess and Annikin Starkiller, and escapes with them in a lifepod. The battlestation is destroyed, and the Imperial ground troops are beaten. Once the battle is won, Queen Leia rewards Luke, Annikin, Valorum and the others with medals in the magnificent throne room of Aquilae. Artwo and Threepio are simply relieved all the excitement is over, and exit the hall of honor.

This first draft screenplay alters and expands much of the original material, but is still very crude and bloated in cinematic terms. Lucas’s year-long effort introduces two villains: a sadistic general named Darth Vader and Prince Valorum, a Black Knight of the Sith. The characters are both interesting but still, at this point in the saga, somewhat one-dimensional. By making them into one person, who starts out as the embodiment of evil then changes in reaction to another’s evil deeds, Lucas has the essence of the space-fantasy’s tragic figure. Also, George seems to transpose Kane Starkiller’s disability (–he must remain in protective cybernetic armor to maintain his life systems–) onto later conceptions of Vader. Han Solo, the huge green- skinned smuggler, remains somewhat unchanged (except in appearance) by the final draft. Owen and Beru Lars would eventually become farmers (not anthropologists), and place a much more important role as Luke’s uncle and aunt. Of course, the two bumbling bureaucrats are now bumbling robots.

Other sequences, like the group’s adventure in the desert and cantina of Aquilae, Leia’s rescue from the prison complex, the dogfight in space and the rewards’ ceremony also continue untouched to the final draft of Star Wars. The asteroid chase and cloud city remain in tact to The Empire Strikes Back, and the jungle battle, which would eventually form one of the key sequences in Return of the Jedi, has been fleshed out in much greater detail. The earlier sequences (on Utapau and in the capitol of Aquilae) also provide interesting clues to characterization; for example, Grande Mouff Tarkin appears, not as a governor, but as a religious leader, and Kane’s decision to leave his son in the hands of a master is similar to that made by Ben Kenobi, surrendering Luke to the master Yoda. But there was still much work to be done before the script could be a film.

July 1974–Two months later, Lucas produced a slightly revised version of the first script. Although the central action remains the same, several names and concepts have been reworked (for inexplicable reasons). Luke is still an aging General, but now he is identified as a former Dai Noga who master the great space Force. “Force” is used, for the first time, to identify a metaphysical power which only Dai Nogas can utilize. Princess Leia has become Zara; Annikin Starkiller is now Justin Valor, and Wookees are referred to as Jawas. Captain Dodona replaces Prince Valorum as a member of a warrior sect known as the Legions of Lettow. He has been given the task of hunting down and destroying the remaining Dai Nogas; but he, like Valorum, undergoes a change of heart. Other changes, for the most part in name only, appear throughout the story, and provide a surface, somewhat cosmetic change to the whole saga. George Lucas knew the script was still a mess, and worked hard to produce another version.

January 1975–The second screenplay was finished with the title “The Adventures of the Starkiller, Episode One of the Star Wars.” The new story was set in the Republic Galactica, which was ravaged by civil war, and focused on a quest for the Kiber Crystal, a powerful energy source which controlled the Force of Others. [Fans of Allan Dean Foster's Star Wars novel Splinter of the Mind's Eye will no doubt recognize the reference to the crystal.] The roll-up concluded with a prophetic promise: “In times of greatest despair there shall come a savior, and he shall be known as ‘The Sons of Suns.’”

The Jedi-Bendu, led by General Skywalker and his twelve children, represent the good side of the Force (known as the Ashla Force), while Lord Vader, a seven-foot-tall black hooded knight, dominates the dark side. Obsessed with possessing the powerful crystal, Vader has been eliminating the Jedi-Bendu one-by-one. Luke Starkiller, a teenage boy, has lost both of his parents on a planet destroyed by the Death Star, and seeks out a nameless “seer” for advice about the Force and his future. Meanwhile, Leia’s rebel cruiser has come under the attack of an Imperial warship, far above Luke’s homeworld, and her efforts to provide a detailed map of the location of the Kiber Crystal to General Skywalker has failed. That map, along with vital construction data about the Death Star, is concealed in a small robot and jettisoned to the planet below.

After discovering the small robot (and his talkative android companion), Starkiller journeys to the space port to enlist a star pilot. There, he meets Han Solo, a young Corellian pirate who was formerly a cabin boy. Solo is burly, bearded, and flamboyantly dressed, and has a guinea pig-like creature named Boma for a girlfriend and a two-hundred year-old Wookee companion named Chewbacca. They join forces with Luke, and eventually link up with General Skywalker and his twelve children. (Skywalker has been training his children in fighter craft for an assault on the Death Star, and the information provided by the small robot gives them the edge they need.)

Luke manages to rescue both Leia and his older brother Deak from Vader, and during the final assault on the Death Star, he takes aim at its singular weakness. Starkiller destroys the Empire’s battlestation, but there is still much to be accomplished. Vader is still on the loose, and the Kiber Crystal is still hidden in an unknown region of the galaxy. The script ends with a teaser, entitled “The Princess of Ondes,” in which Leia and her family are kidnapped and a perilous search begins.

This screenplay had finally brought George Lucas’s epic vision into focus. While the story remains consistent with his original synopsis, the action, broken into three distinct locations, was certainly manageable from both an aesthetic and technical point-of-view. He had pared his story down, blended characters and discarded material which would eventually comprise the other two films. Lucas had also transformed the two most endearing characters in the saga into their final forms. Darth Vader was now a Dark Lord of the Sith and the chief adversary of Luke and the forces of good. Han Solo is no longer a green-skinned alien (like the bounty hunter Greedo) but a young Corellian pirate. In fact, Solo’s character is drawn as a thinly disguised version of George’s own mentor, Francis Ford Coppola. And although the Kiber Crystal would ultimately be dropped from the series (as the physical embodiment of the Force, Lucas had found the central impetus (–Hitchcock often referred to it as a “maguffin”–) upon which the action would turn.

Lucas now also knew that this story was only part of a much greater whole. In May 1975, he retitled The Star Wars as episode four in The Adventures of Luke Starkiller, and sent a synopsis of the screenplay to Alan Ladd Jr. The Fox executive greeted the draft with much enthusiasm, but questioned George about the other episodes. It seemed strange to everyone (but Lucas) to start a motion picture in the middle of the action.

While writing and revising the various drafts of the screenplay for Star Wars, Lucas had kept changing his mind as to the focus of the story. He scribbled out in longhand on specially selected blue-and-green lined paper various story synopses. Between drafts one and two, he wrote a prequel of sorts which dealt with Luke’s father and his relationship to Darth Vader and Ben Kenobi. George decided he didn’t like it, and wrote a completely different treatment with Luke as the central figure. The plot was not all that different from the second screenplay (or the finished film, for that matter), but featured Han Solo as Luke’s older, battle-weary brother. He returns to Tatooine to enlist Luke in the rescue of their father, an old Jedi Knight. At one point, Lucas even toyed with the idea of making Luke a young girl, who fell in love with Solo; but the climatic assault by hundreds of Wookees on the Death Star remained unchanged. Several revisions later, George knew he had enough material to make several motion pictures. He determined that the first trilogy would tell the story of a young Jedi named Ben Kenobi, Luke’s father and the betrayal of Darth Vader. The series would be set twenty years before the action in Star Wars. The middle trilogy would feature Luke as a young man, struggling to learn about the Force, and the final three films would focus on Luke as an adult helping to dismantle the last remnants of the Empire. The whole saga would take place over a sixty-year period, with C-3PO and R2D2 as the common narrative thread to the whole series.

August 1975–The third screenplay demonstrates Lucas’s command and final understanding of his great saga. The narrative, which is tighter and considerably more focused, tells a story that seems very familiar. Luke, son of the famous late Jedi Knight, Anakin Starkiller, works as a farmboy for his bitter uncle Owen, who has stolen his nephew’s savings to rescue his farm. His older brother Biggs has already gone to the Space Academy, and he longs to follow him there. But when Luke discovers a holographic message from Princess Leia in the memory systems of an R2-D2 unit, he seeks out General Kenobi, his father’s comrade. Ben Kenobi is “a shabby old desert rat of a man,” who may be insane (according to Owen); however, after he manages to save Luke from the sand people, the young farmboy begins to doubt his uncle’s words.

Allied in a common cause to save Leia and return R2 to the rebel forces, Luke and Ben seek out a “tough James Dean-style starpilot,” named Han Solo. Solo and his copilot, a Wookee nicknamed Chewie, agree to take them and their two robots to the rebel base on their space freighter which they use for smuggling. The group is ultimately forced to blast their way out of the space port when Imperial troops arrive to arrest Luke. Later, while traveling through hyperspace, Kenobi feels the presence of a mysterious force, the Kiber Crystal, and orders that they penetrate the defenses of the Death Star to obtain the crystal. Once aboard the battlestation, Han and Luke rescue Leia, who has been using the mind-control powers of a witch to keep the interrogators at bay. Ben also searches for the Kiber Crystal and encounters his former nemesis, Darth Vader. The two struggle in a fierce battle with light-sabres, and Ben is wounded but saved by Han and Luke in the nick of time. The aging Jedi knight passes the crystal onto Luke, who then uses its magical powers to destroy the Death Star. (During the climatic space battle, Luke’s older brother Biggs appears as one of the rebel pilots.) They are welcomed as conquering heroes at the rebel base, and Leia rewards them with medals and honorary titles.

Even though the dialogue is still somewhat crude, the third screenplay captures the spirit and imagination that would become the Star Wars movie. Now all Lucas had to do was polish some rough edges and rethink his notions about the Force. He would eventually jettison the Kiber Crystal in the fourth screenplay, and convey the Force in metaphysical terms.

March 1976–The fourth screenplay was actually the one that George Lucas chose to film. The narrative covers most of the action in the movie, with two important deletions. In the script, Biggs, who is now Luke’s older friend, returns to Tatooine to discuss the Space Academy and his decision to join the rebels in their war against the Empire. This scene was actually filmed, but later trimmed during the final editing of the motion picture. The other sequence details Han’s negotiations with Jabba the Hut prior to his liftoff from Tatooine. Again, parts of this sequence were filmed but later discarded. George Lucas also changed Luke’s surname from Starkiller to Skywalker, and took out any references to the Kiber Crystal or Leia’s witch-like powers. The final product of Star Wars, which many consider to be one of the great motion pictures of all time, is a testament to Lucas’s persistence and creative imagination.

CHARACTERS

The inspiration for many of the characters in the Star Wars saga came from many of the sources George consulted while writing the first film; whereas the characters themselves may have undergone various changes in gender and form, their basic personalities remained firmly rooted in mythic or literary traditions. Lucas studied dozens of ancient legends, including King Arthur, read a variety of fantasy and science fiction stories, including Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings Trilogy, and isolated the most common elements and archetypal characters in an effort to produce a story that is somewhat universal. It’s fascinating to view these characters in hindsight, to see how certain premises and personalities were kept intact and how others were transformed or simply abandoned.

Luke, the hero of George Lucas’s space-fantasy, was originally imagined as a swashbuckling freebooter like Flash Gordon (from Alex Raymond’s famous series) or John Carter (Edgar Rice Burroughs’s Warlord of Mars). Adept with both sabres and blasters, the character had risen to ranks of General and Jedi knight. In the thirteen-page summary, General Skywalker leads a rebel band of teenage boys against the Empire. By the first draft screenplay, Luke was still a general in his early sixties, and the hero of the piece was now Annikin Starkiller, aged eighteen. Several revisions later, Luke was again the center of the story. He had became a teenager, who must to rescue his brother Deak from the clutches of Darth Vader. George felt there was much more room for character development, if he introduced a young innocent who must grow to manhood, and kept the story central to him. By the next to final draft, Luke had become a farm boy, son of a famous Jedi knight, who must deliver R2D2 to a rebel stronghold on a faraway planet. The evolution of his character was nearly complete; all he needed was a mentor.

Throughout the many rewrites, Luke’s thoughtful, old mentor who appears as “a shabby old desert rat” was to have been the central role in the piece. Lucas saw the character as a cross between Gandalf the Wizard in Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings Trilogy, Merlin the Magician and the samurai swordsman often played by Toshiro Mifune. (In fact, George first imagined Mifune in the role of Ben Kenobi, but later went with Alec Guinness when he realized that distinguished actor was available for the part.) He wanted Ben (Obi-Wan) Kenobi to be a kind and powerful wizard who had a certain dignity and could influence the weak-minded. As first envisioned, Kenobi was probably the early General Skywalker; then, in later drafts, Kane Starkiller, an anonymous “seer,” and finally the crazed desert hermit who was also a Jedi master.

Leia was first conceived by Lucas as an amalgamation of Dejah Thoris (from A Princess of Mars), Lady Galadriel of Lothlorien (from The Lord of the Rings Trilogy) and Dorothy (from The Wizard of Oz). Never really named in the original story treatment, she was an eleven year-old princess, with “goddesslike” powers, who needed rescuing from Imperial troops. Subsequent drafts of the screenplay portrayed her as sixteen year-old princess who fell in love with Han Solo, the central male figure, and finally the twin sister to Luke Skywalker. At one point, in the third draft, George Lucas even gave Leia the mind-control powers of a witch, but later revised that when she became Luke’s long lost sibling.

Han Solo was first introduced in the first screenplay as a huge, green-skinned monster with gills and no nose, and only later developed into a human. Lucas probably saw Solo as an amalgamation of all the great sidekicks in literature and film, from Lancelot (in the Arthurian legends) to Tonto (in popular culture), but he eventually evolved into a fully-realized, leading player. By the second screenplay, Han had been transformed into burly individual resembling Francis Ford Coppola. Though somewhat comic in appearance, with flamboyant clothes and a guinea-pig girlfriend, he was clearly a person to be reckoned with. Lucas later made him a cynical smuggler, and thought of him like a James Dean, “a cowboy in a starship: simple, sentimental and cocksure.” That persona stuck to Han Solo in the first film, but he gradually emerged as “a sexy Clark Gable,” in the subsequent films, easily winning Leia from Luke.

Artwo Detwo and See-Threepio began life as two bumbling bureaucrats in the original treatment, George’s primitive notion of comic relief. Their characters are derivative of Samwise Gamgee and Pippin Took in J.R.R. Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings Trilogy and the famous comic duo of Laurel and Hardy. Much later, after George had made them bumbling construction robots on the Death Star, they began to evolve into personalities all their own. See-Threepio was the overbearing android who complained too much, and Artwo, as his much smaller counterpart, was the brunt of Threepio’s angry jibes. While Artwo resembles one of the hapless drones in “Silent Running” and Threepio the Robotrix in “Metropolis,” they were both original creations of Ralph McQuarrie. Lucas had given him free reign to create whatever he thought was appropriate, and McQuarrie relied upon his background as an illustrator for Boeing Aircraft and NASA to visualize George’s ideas.

Lucas used Ming the Merciless, the evil ruler of Mongo (and later Mars) in the Flash Gordon comics, as the model for his emperor. Several early drafts described the Emperor as simply an evil sovereign who had taken control of the Alliance and proclaimed himself king. But Lucas was not satisfied with that back story, and began thinking of the character in terms that a contemporary audience would recognize–Richard Nixon. The Emperor became a corrupt politician who, with the help of his two cohorts (General Darth Vader and Valorum, the Black Knight), destroyed all but one of the Jedi-Templar. Then, in a time of great chaos, he had himself declared ruler. By the final draft, the evil sovereign had evolved into a master of the Dark Side of the Force, as well as the tutor of Kenobi’s young apprentice, Darth Vader.

The evolution of Dark Vader is also interesting. He was conceived by George Lucas as the epitomy of evil, the Black Knight in the Arthurian Tales or Sauron from Lord of the Rings. Though he did not appear in any form in the original treatment, the character had two roles in the first draft screenplay: General Darth Vader, and Valorum, the Black Knight. In the second draft of that screenplay, Vader (under the name Captain Dodona) was an intergalactic bounty hunter, who was hired to track down and murder Jedi Knights for the Emperor. Then Vader became a Dark Lord of the Sith, and Lucas created Boba Fett from that early concept of Vader as a bounty hunter. However, in the novel Star Wars and the final screenplay, the reference to Vader as some sort of bounty hunter remains. According to Obi-Wan, Vader betrayed and murdered the pilot Skywalker, then “helped the Empire hunt down and destroy the Jedi Knights.” Darth Vader was also given Kane Starkiller’s exoskeleton to help him survive, and a background story was worked up by Lucas to explain his severe injuries. (Apparently, many years before, Ben Kenobi and Darth Vader faught a fierce light-sabre duel, and Vader was driven into the molten lava of an active volcano. He survived, but his body was ruined, and he was forced to wear an ominous black breathing mask that also hides his disfigurement, like The Man in the Iron Mask. No much more is revealed about his character in the first film; but by the third audiences learn that he was, in fact, Anakin Skywalker, a former Jedi knight and father of Luke.

George Lucas’s vision for Star Wars began as a simple thirteen-page story treatment, and evolved into its own galaxy of heroes and villains, ‘droids, and creatures of a thousand worlds. The series of three films also broke all existing box office records, and went onto become the most successful movies ever made. Perhaps, many of those discarded story ideas, characters and creations will one day resurface in a new saga set “a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away . . .”

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Almost A Movie

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One fan of this scriptment, Daniele Tomasi, has devoted an entire website to it. SpiderCameron.altervista.org features the scriptment in English and Italian, with commentary and storyboards.

Download scriptment here.

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Cameron gives his thoughts on the film in an Ain’t it Cool interview here.

Read about Oliver Stone’s involvement at CHUD.com

Read Mike White’s reviews of the Hayes and Hamm scripts in issue 10 of Cashiers du Cinemart.

• Return of the Apes by Terry Hayes
• Planet of the Apes by Sam Hamm

Avary.com used to have the script and an essay on how it evolved, but it appears to have been taken down.

I’ve found references to the script, and it can be seen in a behind-the-scenes doc on the Infinifilm DVD release of A Nightmare on Elm Street, but it probably hasn’t been distributed online. If anyone knows where it can be found, please let me know!

Here’s the story as recounted in Peter Jackson: From Prince of Splatter to Lord of the Rings by Ian Pryor.

Jackson’s first Hollywood paycheck involves the complex family tree of Freddy Krueger… Jackson’s first films Bad Taste and Meet the Feebles caught the attention of a number of New Line staff, including scriptreader Mark Ordesky. Though Ordesky failed to persuade his bosses to distribute either film, Jackson and Feebles scriptwriter Danny Mulheron were instead offered the chance to write a script for Elm Street…

Jackson and Mulheron’s script begins with Freddy initially having lost much of his power to terrify. Teenagers in Springfield take sleeping pills so that they can go into the dream world and take turns attacking him. the film’s hero is a policeman in a coma, who finds himself in the dream world, where he discovers Krueger. “The climax of it was the deconstruction of Freddy Krueger,” says Mulheron. “By confronting him with his impotence, he lost his ability to scare.” Jackson and Mulheron’s script was paid for but never used, partly because Elm Street production veteran Rachel Talalay had drafted a treatment for her own film Freddy’s Dead: The Final Nightmare. New Line commissioned a script based upon this treatment, which failed to satisfy, after which Talalay asked New Line executive Michael De Luca to write the script himself. Freddy’s Dead was filmed in early 1991. New Line staff, enthused by the Jackson Mulheron script, later asked Jackson if he might want to work on their long-in-development Freddy Versus Jason, but Jackson turned them down.

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Oliver Stone turned this one inside out. To this day, Tarantino hasn’t been able to watch the movie all the way through. Me, I like the final product, but I can see how heart-wrenching it could be for the writer.

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This doesn’t happen often. Lynch’s TV show was developed, the pilot was shot, and then dropped. (Not that unusual.) But then Lynch got funding to shoot some more scenes, re-edit the film, and release it theatrically. Not only did it work, it went on to win awards. Bootlegs of the original TV pilot can be found online.

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Jackson first developed this project back before doing The Lord of the Rings. This 1996 draft has a much different tone than the final 2005 film.

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Here’s an early draft, presumably the one that Harry Knowles loved so much.It contains scenes and characters that were dropped in the final version, and thus several chapter names are different. Note that it contains all ten chapters, as the movie wasn’t broken into two volumes until the post-production phase. Read comparisons of the script to the movies Kill Bill Vol. 1and Kill Bill Vol. 2 at UGO Screenwriter’s Voice.

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Ellison did a good job pulling Isaac Asimov’s stories into a cohesive script, but it was shelved anyway, never to be produced. Fortunately, fans can purchase the screenplay in book form, with many pretty pictures. You’ll have to go to the bookstore for this one. In the summer of 2004, director Alex Proyas brought us a shiny new version starring Will Smith, with a script by Akiva Goldsman.

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]]> http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/77/feed 0 http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/75 http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/75#comments Thu, 30 Oct 2008 02:01:28 +0000 mike http://maddogmovies.com/almostwp/?p=75 a.k.a. Indiana Jones IV
a.k.a. Indiana Jones and the Monkey King
a.k.a. Indiana Jones and the Garden of Life
by Chris Columbus
From what I can gather, this script was actually written by established screenwriter Chris Columbus. He wrote it unsolicited and presented it to the Lucas camp after the success of Temple of Doom. It wasn’t produced, as Jeffrey Boam’s Last Crusade script was used instead.Years later, the Monkey King script showed up online, with changes to the title and date made to fool the fan community that this may be a script for the fourth movie. Don’t believe it.

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]]> http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/75/feed 0 http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/73 http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/73#comments Thu, 30 Oct 2008 01:59:21 +0000 mike http://maddogmovies.com/almostwp/?p=73 New Line commissioned tons of scripts for this project. They spun their wheels for several years, and then produced a movie that was good, clean, mediocre fun. Sure, I liked it, but I think that had more to do with director Ronny Yu than the quality of the writing. Briggs’ script is notable for its reference to the Phantasm movies. (Look for the SILVER “PHANTASM” BALL near the end.)

• Nightmare 13: Freddy meets Jason by Lewis Abernathy
• Freddy vs. Jason by Peter Briggs
• Jason vs. Freddy (1997) by Brannon Braga and Ronald D. Moore
• Freddy vs. Jason (12/98) by Jonathan Aibel & Glenn Berger
• Freddy vs. Jason (2000) by Mark Protosevich

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In the mid 1970s, surrealist filmmaker Jodorowsky worked to put together his dream version of Dune – which would include many bizarre elements that author Frank Herbert understandably had problems with. He assembled a dream team of collaborators. French comic artist Moebius contributed some 3000 storyboards. British painter Christopher Foss and Swiss artist H.R. Giger were brought in as conceptual artists. Dan O’Bannon, who did sci-fi on the cheap with Dark Star, would do miniature effects. The film would be scored by Pink Floyd. And the mad Emperor of the Galaxy would be played by Salvador Dali. Unfortunately, big budget sci-fi was considered risky at the time. When Jodorowsky’s Dune fell apart, Moebius, Foss, O’Bannon, and Giger went on to work on Alien. Dune (directed by David Lynch) was eventually made after the success of the Star Wars movies, Alien, and Close Encounters of the Third Kind.

Read Jodorowsky’s behind-the-scenes essay: The Story of Dune- ‘The Movie You Will Never See. Hosted by Hotweird.com.

]]> http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/71/feed 0 http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/69 http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/69#comments Thu, 30 Oct 2008 01:55:05 +0000 mike http://maddogmovies.com/almostwp/?p=69 I don’t know what the story is on “Resurrection,” but Zombie’s “2037″ would have been interesting. He was really frustrated when they dropped him… and I was equally frustrated when The Crow Salvation turned out to be such a boring retread.

Interestingly, I believe some elements from “2037″ were later used in the fourth Crow film.

The Crow 3: Resurrection by Steven E. de Souza
The Crow 2037 by Rob Zombie

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Blade Runner (July 24, 1980) by Hampton Fancher
Blade Runner (Feb 23, 1981) by Hampton Fancher and David Peoples

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Here’s an early version of Batman Returns. Sam Hamm wrote the first Batman (and has taken a crack at many other comic book movies), so it made sense for him to do a draft of the sequel. The final screenplay was written by Daniel Waters.

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]]> http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/65/feed 0 http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/63 http://maddogmovies.com/almost/archives/63#comments Thu, 30 Oct 2008 01:48:27 +0000 mike http://maddogmovies.com/almostwp/?p=63 by Peter Briggs
This script was written as a spec, based on the Dark Horse comic. Briggs didn’t option the property first (as is the accepted practice), but the script was actually purchased by Fox anyway. Things fell apart when they decided to go ahead with Alien Resurrection instead. The final Alien vs. Predator utilizes a new script by Paul W. S. Anderson. It takes place in Antarctica and has little to do with the Briggs screenplay. Notice the original title was “Aliens (plural) vs. Predator”.

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After Alien Resurrection, Ridley Scott and James Cameron discussed doing another sequel. Cameron and another writer (name?) worked up some ideas, but the project was scrapped when Alien Vs. Predator moved forward. Cameron mentions his involvement briefly in an Ain’t it Cool interview here.

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Alien III (revised first draft) by William Gibson
Alien 3 (unspecified draft) by Eric Red
Alien III (first draft) by David Twohy
Alien III (first draft) by John Fasano and Vincent Ward
Alien III (revision of Hill/Giler 12/90 draft) by Rex Pickett
Alien III (final draft) by Walter Hill and David Giler

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Directed by Oley Sassone

An internet favorite! Roger Corman produced this low budget adaptation of the popular comic book. Much of it is awful or laughable, but it has a certain naive charm. The rumor is that Corman was actually paid NOT to release it, because another studio was planning a big budget production. Bootlegs of the film can be found online.

The Fantastic Four trailer from Youtube:

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Directed by Jerry Lewis

Clowns and the Holocaust. Who wouldn’t want to see that? Never released due to the bad taste factor, but after Life is Beautiful, could the world be ready to see Jerry Lewis take on the death camps? Read about the movie’s history in an article from Film Threat.

Read the final draft (with notations from the set) and view behind-the-scenes footage at Subterranean Cinema.

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Directed by Craig Hamann and Quentin Tarantino

Before Tarantino directed his first movie (Reservoir Dogs), he co-directed ANOTHER first movie, My Best Friend’s Birthday.

Tarantino later considered it amateurish, so he claimed to be a first time director when putting together the production for “Reservoir Dogs.” Although “Birthday” is really no more embarrassing than most student films, QT thought if investors saw it, they’d hire someone else to direct.

About half the film was lost in a lab mishap, but 36 minutes of it survive on the internet today.

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I’m not crazy about this one. Leave The Thing alone. It had a great ambiguous ending that would be undercut by a sequel.

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After several failed attempts to get a new Superman off the ground, this crossover was proposed by Andrew Kevin Walker. It was designed to relaunch both the Superman and Batman franchises. I think it’s a great idea. Sure, they’re both good guys, but as anyone who reads the comics knows, the two heroes have conflicting personalities and ideologies. This screenplay was scrapped when other (separate) Superman and Batman projects came into favor and attached director Wolfgang Peterson left to do Troy.

Read reviews at UGO Screenwriter’s Voice and SupermanHomepage.com

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After Kevin Smith’s Superman Lives was dropped, Alex Ford wrote this script for Warner Brothers. He pitched it as the first of seven movies, which was intriguing, but Ford eventually split with Warners due to creative differences.

This “Man of Steel” is independent from Bryan Singer’s Man of Steel, the proposed sequel to Superman Returns.

Read a review of the script at SupermanHomepage.com

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Smith has been pretty vocal about the horrors of development. For all the hype, I’m not too keen on this script. It has some interesting elements: the death and rebirth of Superman, the presence of both Lex Luthor and Braniac. I liked the way the story just starts without explaining who Superman is — like a comic, or an episode of the animated show. But there is some humor that doesn’t work, and three separate robot characters. That’s at least one too many robots for me.

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Kaufman is a hot screenwriter. The source material is by hot adaptee Philip K. Dick, master of the sci-fi mindbender. What’s not to love? Well, when Richard Linklater took on the movie, he wrote his own screenplay instead.

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As Who Framed Roger Rabbit was a parody of film noir, this movie would have taken on the war genre, with Roger involved in WWII. I have a hard copy of this script, but haven’t had the chance to get it transcribed. Read a review at Film Buff Online. See “Who Screwed Roger Rabbit” at the Animation World Network.

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While waiting for the greenlight on Desperado, Rodriguez was commissioned to write the third Predator movie. Since the Aliens and Predator franchises merged, there seemed to be little chance this one would be made. But in April 2009, Variety reported that the project was back on the table.

Read a script review at Screenwriter’s Utopia.

From Robert Rodriguez, in an interview at Moviehole.net:

…And it was really a cool script, it’s floating around somewhere. But it’s huge, and will never be made, the studio edited it and said there’s no way we can make this, this would cost — even at that time — 150 million, and no women would ever go see this movie.”

According to a 2009 story in Variety:

For Fox, Rodriguez has scripted “Predators,” a film that will bring back the dreadlock-sporting alien hunter who originated in the Arnold Schwarzenegger hit “Predator.” While a sequel didn’t become a hit, Fox kept the alien sharp by launching the “Alien Vs. Predator,” a wildly profitable series that has racked up strong grosses and DVD sales, wit little or no gross out the door.

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Did you ever see Johnny Mnemonic? Ignore the overall quality of the movie for a moment… Did you at least like the idea of jacking your brain into the internet? Gibson’s novel Neuromancer conveyed that in a fun and exciting way. The book was optioned, and Chuck Russell turned in a draft. Read a review of the Russell draft at UGO Screenwriter’s Voice.That didn’t get made, so Gibson took a crack at it himself.

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The Killer was a break-out film for director John Woo and actor Chow Yun-fat. After the Hong Kong movie made the film festival rounds, Tri-Star became interested in doing an English language remake, with Richard Gere as the hitman and Denzel Washington as the cop. But because the relationship between the two male characters might be hard for western audiences to accept,the producers later considered casting Michelle Yeoh in the cop role. The project never came together and was eventually set aside.

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Alfred Hitchcock was intrigued by the style of French and Italian “new wave” directors of the late 60s. He devised a story of a sexual predator, to be shot in a dressed-down documentary style. Some test footage (which can be seen in Dial H for Hitchcock) was shot, but the studio balked. Hitch was imprisoned by his own reputation. As much as he may have wanted to experiment, the backers preferred a typical Hitchcock suspense movie. The script, (sections of which are available in Hitchcock’s Notebooks) was alternately called “Kaleidoscope” and “Frenzy.” Years later, Hitch recycled certain ideas for his 1973 film, Frenzy, but it was not the same story overall. Find out more at Steven DeRosa’s Writing with Hitchcock website.

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Bruce Campbell himself thought this movie probably wouldn’t work. How do you do each franchise justice? Personally, I think the Friday the 13th and Elm Street series interlock nicely, but tying in the Evil Dead continuity seems wrong. After this projected sequel to Freddy Vs. Jason was dropped, Bloody-Disgusting posted the treatment, but it has since been removed.

Recently, the concept was reworked into a comic book, available here.

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Peter Briggs, without invitation, wrote a spec treatment for an Escape from New York sequel. His treatment had nothing to do with the actual movie.

Read the synopsis, originally posted at Looker Online.

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Bruce Campbell was to have starred in this parody of Indiana Jones. Sam Raimi directed a 10 minute short to raise funding, but the project didn’t get off the ground.

Read the script at BeckerFilms.com.

Watch the Cleveland Smith short, available on Youtube:

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In the last few years of his life, Hitchcock was developing a spy story with screenwriter David Freeman. The script has been published, along with behind the scenes details, in The Last Days of Alfred Hitchcock.

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